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01-02-2006, 08:16 AM
Hiya all. It's me again. Just here for a minute to share...

A letter to the editor begins Dear Sir:
n'est-ce pas?

My letter and new song sprung from that thought...

Dear Sir:

I remember when it was humankind
I remember kinder days when I was blind
Swimming in the lakes, building castles in the sand
What has happened to my fellow man?

I remember having friends - no enemies
I remember singing songs and climbing trees
Now I'm all grown up with wings to fly
How I'm longing for those days gone by

I believe in love and the truth Dear Sir:
I believe in hope and the future
Fuck your greed, your GM seed, you cannot modify me
Fuck your wars, you corporate whores, learn to live and let be

I've been questioning the changes that I've seen
The lies - the news - the Global Californian dream
The rat race that we've become - the lust and greed they sell
Apathy, pornography - a childhood living hell

I believe in love and thruth Dear Sir:
I believe in hope and the future
Fuck your lies, your alibis, don't play me for a fool
My mind is strong and your just wrong - what you're doing ain't cool

I've been dreaming of a page for history
Where the truth is known and our minds are free
If humankind could free some time to think and get a clue
A Hollywood production of corruption would shine through

I believe in love and the truth Dear Sir:
I believe in hope and the future
Fuck your fear my mind is clear - let's talk morality
Your game is blame, the world's a shame - WHO sets molesters free?

I've been wondering just what does this all mean
Why have we been living Sir's Orwellian Dreams?
You best beware true people care, Dear Sir: can't we be friends?
Why should history be a mystery...


My name is Mary and I am a mum who gives a fuck XXX

01-03-2006, 03:07 AM
Any feedback please?

01-03-2006, 06:28 AM
I like it!

01-25-2006, 08:58 AM
Thanx man.

Me and the bods in my music class are performing it tomorrow and i will put a music file of it on this thread next week.

It's quite cool actually

hugs and squidgy kisses

02-03-2006, 07:51 AM
If anyone wants an mp3 of this song or can tell me how to somehow stick it on this page... i will send via email and hopefully get it sorted.

02-13-2006, 09:50 AM
blimey, that is a terrible poem. but i like it. it has style. and charisma. and finesse. so in essence, this is a fantastic poem. not that it doesnt have its negative points. its is crass, crude and unimaginative. therefore i deem it to be a bad poem. but wait, have you considered taxidermy? no i have not my good sir, but i will look into the matter with keen intrigue. then i bid you good day. and i you sir. goody day.