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Old 10-05-2005, 04:30 PM
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Closed hearts
blur our vision

souls die
rejected
imprisoned

incisions made
with contemptuous hearts

leave us open
and pull us apart

voices calling
out of the dark

white winged angels
upon us embark

searching for clarity
and honest revision

embracing our spirit
with graceful precision

out of the depths
of our deepest despair

the angels are speaking
and so we shall dare

to hear of their wisdom
will set our hearts free

open forever
our eyes shalt then see

an immaculate rejection
born from our dignity

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Old 10-05-2005, 08:55 PM
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Lovely poem, BA.
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Old 10-05-2005, 09:06 PM
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Thank you, Freeman!

I do need a place to share some of my writings so I dedicate this thread to me and everyone is invited.

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Old 10-08-2005, 02:08 PM
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BURIED

I buried all my writings
in the backyard
under dirt

my knuckles
they were bleeding
and my fingers really hurt

the words were scrawled
like zigs and zags
and I was writing
all night long

the words THEY said
I couldn't write
were turning into song

they're all the evidence
I ever had
so I dug into the dawn

THEY found me
in the morning
sprawled out
across the lawn

THEY took
the shovel
from my hand
and made me
show
THEM where

THEY burned them right
in front
of me
all I
could do
was stare
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Old 10-08-2005, 02:10 PM
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FREEDOM OF SPEECH

My freedom of speech
was stripped away
when through my poetry
I tried to say

what was going on
in second grade

all it brought
was to my knees
a beg, a bargain
and a plea

don't break my arms
don't hurt my wrists
I know that now
I must resist

the urge to write
and tell the world
what you are doing
to this little girl
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Old 10-08-2005, 02:12 PM
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PIECES

my childhood
is ragged
and jagged
in fragmented pieces

lying around
in crumbled
up creases

I stumbled
I tumbled
I feel to my knees

leave me alone
I'm begging you
please!

whatever you're doing
I know it's not right
I might be a child
but, I'm gonna fight

someday I'll publish
your sins and much more
someday I promise
I'll settle the score
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